Research: Setting Your Historical Romance
In late 1994, I quit my full-time
job to try my hand at writing a novel. Yes, it was an enormous
risk, and yes, I have a very understanding and supportive husband.
Naively, I expected to complete my book by year's end--never
mind that said book consisted of less than fifty pages of a pre-Civil
War time-travel idea that was going nowhere fast. Around Christmas,
I had made no real progress and I began to panic. The story wasn't
coming together at all. Even worse, I was bored to death of it.
How was I going to break the news to my husband that I had nothing
to show for my four months of "full-time writing" at
home?
I was in my car, pondering my
immediate and utter failure as a novelist when I was hit with
a sudden, blinding flash of inspiration. An old U2 song came
on the radio, and, like a scene from a movie, I watched as a
new story began to unfold before my eyes. Well, maybe not an
entire story, but rather, a scene. A very compelling scene of
a young boy fleeing from a band of armed men on horseback. He
was beaten, crying, and running for his life. It was so vivid,
so emotional, I just knew I had to write it. The only problem
was, the scene was, without question, medieval. A subject about
which I knew nothing. Where to begin?
The internet had not really taken
shape yet then, so I started my search for information at my
local library. I read encyclopedias and general histories on
England--including children's books--learning what I could on
a cursory level about feudal society and life in the middle ages.
After some investigation, I found a brief biography on King Stephen
(1138-1153). It was said that while he reigned, God and His saints
slept. Stephen's noble barons ran wild in England, plundering
and pillaging their neighbors, making war without consequence
or reprimand. Based on that one observation, I knew I had found
my perfect setting.
Once I determined where and when
to set my book, I read voraciously within that period--everything
from reference books and biographies to other historical romance
novels set in my chosen era. I delved deeper into the history
of the twelfth century, specializing and allowing my curiosity
to lead me where it would. As I read, I started my own glossary
of terms, jotting down period words and adding their definitions
for easy reference. I photocopied costume etchings and made a
binder for all of my notes and pictures. I collected reams of
information and grabbed up every book I could find on medieval
culture. I could have easily spent another year immersing myself
in the history of England in the middle ages, but sooner or later,
I knew I would have to start writing. The question was, how much
of this fascinating information should I include?
You've probably heard reviewers
criticize historical romance novels for either not enough history
to make the story seem real, or too much history that overpowers
the romance. While it really comes down to the author's personal
style, I believe the trick to a commercially successful romance
novel is to keep your historical content somewhere between pretty
"wallpaper" and the primary focus of your story. It
should provide a foundation and a framework for your story, but
never forget that your focus--and your reader's focus--should
be rooted on the characters and their budding romance. Resist
the temptation to show off all that you have learned about your
setting. Your knowledge of setting and timeframe will show in
the detail you leave out, as much as it will show in the detail
you choose to include.
Another temptation to resist
is that of bending historical fact or people to suit your story.
If you know King Richard was on crusade in 1191, don't put him
in England just so he can interact with your fictional characters.
The same goes for historic battles. If you have to change a date
or location of a well-known battle, then perhaps it's not the
right battle to include in your book.
On the flip side, there are some
instances where a little harmless bending of facts can help make
your story or scene clearer to the reader. For example, in my
next book, BLACK
LION'S BRIDE, which is set in the Holy Land during the
Third Crusade, I have the English hero and Muslim heroine playing
chess together. Chess, I discovered through my research, actually
originated in Arabia (or China, depending on who you believe)
and was brought to England and France by the crusaders in Richard's
army. What a fun and serendipitous fact! The game was called
shatranj, but the board, the moves, and most of
the pieces were similar to the later European chess. (For history
buffs, the winning move in shatranj was called "shah mat"
which meant "the king is dead." This later became anglicized
to "check mate" in European chess.) Rather than confuse
readers with the Arabic names of the pieces, wherever possible
I either described them, or gave them the more widely recognized
European names. It's a brief scene, and the chess game is used
as background to the sexual tension between the characters, but
thanks to historic fact and a little creative "massaging"
of a detail or two, it's got an historically authentic feel to
it. (Plus I feel pretty darned clever for being able to weave
it into the story!)
In addition to reference texts
and biographies in researching your setting, don't discount travel
guides and other unconventional sources of information. I recently
found my new favorite resource for settings while browsing my
local B&N. Have you heard of the Knopf Travel Guide
series? Even better than my old favorite, the DK Guides,
the Knopf books are filled with full-color photographs and drawings
on everything from regional flora and fauna, to geography, architecture,
and clothing. There's even a section on history, which will give
you a nice starting place as you begin your study of your chosen
setting.
While you're digging for history
for your book, don't limit your research to politics and culture
of your chosen timeframe and/or place. Read as much and as widely
as you can, probing deeper into the fiber of your setting for
greater texture and ideas. And keep an open mind--you never know
what fascinating little surprises you might uncover in your investigation.
You might even find the plot for your next book.
Which makes a nice segue into
my next topic: Plotting!